Score: 9

"one line summary"

submission: Celebrity Valentines

date: February 14, 2006

Matt, you've come a long way since I first saw you at Newgrounds. Cheers! Gordo, I giggled, I cried, I'll never look at Ranch the same again.

Good job on picking out the song, as well.

Happy V-Day! :)

Score: 8

"Improving"

submission: Stop Crying - Part 3

date: September 14, 2005

My only complaints are the scene changes. They lag, and get very choppy at points, sometimes making the sound not sync up.

Movie length isn't an issue for me, I like longer submissions.

Your drawing improves with each installment, I'm looking forward to the next one. Good luck! :)

Score: 8

"A change of pace"

submission: Stop Crying - Part 2

date: August 10, 2005

I've enjoyed watching the story so far, and you've left them in such places that I can't wait to see what happens next. Your brother seems to be a kind man that loved his younger sister.

It's nice to see something different than the usual Newgrounds fare, and I can see that you've worked hard on this. Keep up the flash, and good luck with part 3. :)

Score: 6

"..."

submission: generic movie 4

date: July 18, 2005

Maybe make boxes around the text to make the choices easier to click

Also, a scoreboard would be nice. I either got 9/10 or 10/10 (wasn't sure about stickers off-hand.)

Score: 9

"Fucking LOL"

submission: Frank's FHOF

date: July 14, 2005

roflskeiter.

Better than I expected. I bet Frank loves it! :D

Score: 8

"For a first flash"

submission: Pissed Off Pets

date: July 14, 2005

That was really good. The animals were well animated, the gags were pretty funny. The audio synced up very well, something lacking in a lot of beginner flash. I hope you make more.

Score: 10

"AAAUUUUUUGGHH"

submission: Throw It! (KB Game)

date: July 12, 2005

I just wasted two hours on this. I'll never make the Top 40, but I still had a blast playing it. Absolutely phenomenal for the size. You've outdone yourself again, Denvish. :)

Score: 6

"Different"

submission: Cartoon Reality

date: July 12, 2005

I like the mixture of animation and reality. Just work on spelling, and Roman numerals if you make a short. Otherwise, it looked just like a B Movie trailer. Nicely done!

Score: 9

"Wow"

submission: Flipz

date: July 12, 2005

That was a lot of fun after I got the hang of it. I can't believe how fast you're able to make all these cool little games. I also liked the music, it went really well with the gameplay. :)

Score: 7

"Some suggestions and praise"

submission: Royce Biggins Ep. One

date: July 11, 2005

The audio started to clip a bit. Play around with the equalisation. Make these longer! I was sad that it ended so quickly, it could have been at LEAST 30 seconds longer. The funny faces help with the humor factor, so definitely keep those as a part of it. The music at the very beginning was really good (although Mr. Timberlake is an excellent choice) and I would like to hear more of that featured. All in all, this is a promising series.